I'm critiquing not the illustration but the story with it, which explains nothing. Now, could there be good succubi? Could a succubi ever do anything but try to drain people or otherwise control them through sex acts? Sure, but you have to EXPLAIN it. Her powers and her desires are linked to SEX: otherwise you don't have a succubus, but something else, no matter how you want to pervert the definition of succubus. It's not that you can't 'bend the rules' but you should EXPLAIN how the rules are being bent - for instance Vampire superheros are sometimes shown getting blood explicitly from bloodbanks or other sources that don't involve feeding off humans directly. Some will take blood from downright bad people. There are vampire superheros (and vampire HUNTER superheros like Blade) but the vampire superheros still need blood, and often struggle with not taking it from innocents or sometimes from humans altogether. If you want to claim you have a 'succubus' there, and she's not even acting like a succubus, what's the point? Take vampires. Nice art, in other words, but the story leaves much to be desired, as traditionally, the ONLY reason a succubus appeared summoned or not was to try to feed off someone's lust. But then she can't drain his life force, nor is he enslaved to her magically or sexually. Now, I suppose one could get away with this by saying she wants to be 'mommy' to Link. A prepubertal child accidentally triggering a spell doesn't fit into any of those categories, and a child Link doesn't give her any 'sexual energy'. B) Summoning, or, at least SURRENDERING (always by means of intercourse of SOME sexual type, usually straight on sex) to a succubus is supposed to be VOLUNTARY (even if you mislead as to WHAT she is, you still have to at least agree to the sex). The description works, except it violates every 'law' succubus's are supposed to honor in any anime/hentai/western scary tale I have ever seen or read. As for Link being naked, that part was NOT my idea, though I don't have a problem with it since his privates aren't showing. eh, I won't go into detail WrathKnight: I prefer F/m pictures. One of their other games, "Your Sweet House", has. If I didn't, wouldn't people ask who she is?ĮDIT 2: Regarding the kid thing, dieselmine has never let reality get in the way of their fantasies. I put the succubus part in because that's who she is. I'm aware it goes against lore, and your idea has merit. It was rushed, admittedly, but then, the primary focus was a simple "Link gets spanked by a succubus who intends to groom him after 'putting him in his place'". If you've seen my previous uploads, you likely know I don't really care about the 'rules' of the characters involved.ĮDIT: Could I have made the story more creative? Yes. She intends to "raise" the boy, and if she gets hungry, she can feed on someone else while he sleeps. Senior Cante: You did read the description, Remo: True, it does violate it, but there's no real law about it, either.
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